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Um, I'm a little confused but it's an ok start. You need to work on your grammar and you need to stick with either third person pov or first person pov. I like the first paragraph but the way it's written is a little odd. After that things get confusing. I mean, what's up with the random quotation marks? I don't know, it's not horrible and it's got potential but it needs a lot of work.I don't know what should happen next, it's your story. Get a plot and write. It's that simple. Let your ideas and emotions flow on to the paper, breathe life into your characters. It's your story, I'm not going to tell you what to do with it, though I suggest you slow things down a little. Good luck.